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Copywriting Tip: Avoid Discussing Pandiculation

11/01/2009

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Sometimes as people put words on paper, an inner alarm shrieks, "Yikes! You're writing! Pull out the big words so you'll sound smart!"

Cancel the inner alarm. Big words don't make you sound smart. They make your stuff hard to read.
 
Don't say
masticate. Say chew. 

Don't say
expectorate. Say spit.

Don't say 
pandiculate. Say yawn.

This is not about targeting an eighth-grade reading level, a myth born of arrogance. It's about capitalizing on our tendency to follow the course of least resistance. Even the stuffiest PhD is more likely to opt for an easy read over an impenetrable one.

A good copywriter disappears behind writing that brings to life the product or service for sale. Sounding
credible can enhance that effect. But devices that draw attention to the writer ("Gee, this writer sure knows big words") steal the product's spotlight.

Steve Cuno
 


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